Wednesday, 4 March 2015



Purpose: To describe an interesting character so we can tell a story about them at the Marae stay.

WALT: Entertain (character description)


Think of a character you could write about.

Draw them.  

Introduce your character in an entertaining way.

Describe their looks.  

Describe their personality.  

I think/feel statement (Conclusion / Summary)

Criteria: I can

Self Assessment

Descriptive vocabulary (words that help to SHOW the reader)

  • use a range of verbs

Language features (phrases that help paint a picture)

  • select one or two similes

  • use onomatopoeia to show sounds

  • select words that start with the same sound (alliteration)

My writing is 2-3 paragraphs (100 - 200 words)

Learning Partner Comment

Feedback: I love the way you told his looks

Feedforward: Next time write a I think sentence.


Overall, how well do you think your learning partner has done?

You need sage to save you because he has pawas listing pawas look at the listing flash out of his head 
is the grdegin of pandora box it's a daggers box it holds the bad guys secret sege has a soft side Rubin he helps people in ned by macking rainbow that's distgrat bad guys wosh uot bad guys sage is 
Coming to get you.

1 comment:

  1. Remember to finish this off - ask your learning partner to read it and give you feedback and feedforward.